Friday, November 11, 2022

A Poem a Day, Week 45, Nov 5 to 11, 2022

 A Poem a Day, Week 45, Nov 5 to 11, 2022

Welcome to Sifting the Rubble's weekly blog and podcast of my poem-a-day challenge for 2022. I am your host, and poet, Emily Gibson. The poems for the 45th week of the year, Nov 5 to 11, mostly originated in observations about the world, as well as prompts from a variety of sources. 

I want to explain, for those new to this podcast, that these are 1 or 2 day poems, which have not gone through the grist of revision. That comes later, something I truly look forward to doing, as I sift the collection for poems to finalize. For now, they are new, not quite steady on their feet, but each speaks of something, so I share them, uncensored. It is part of my healing challenge to write a poem every day this year.

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And now, for this week's poems!


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Poem #309, Your Eyes, Distorted by Mine

by Emily Gibson, Nov 5, 2022


Yesterday, I caught the reflection

of my distorted inner perception 

in the mirrors of another’s eyes.

It called me to deeper inspection.


In one I wore an awkward disguise

woven on a rickety loom of lies

drenched in a sticky, sickly gloom

of critical, nonsensed, self-despise.


The other showed a confident costume

in which my spirit appeared to bloom,

yet colors belied excessive enthusiasm,

and perfumes pretended to presume.  


Between those two eyes lay a chasm,

a history of malignant festered neoplasm

and misguided attempts at self defense

with tentative hints at sacrificial sarcasm.  


Time to get off this dense plastic fence,

stop the unconscious prickly offense,

and view complex quirks with affection:

an overdue adjustment to my lens. 


About "Your Eyes, Distorted by Mine":  The first three lines came to me when I woke up, a gift from somewhere! So I followed them where they wanted to go, into an exploration of how our perception of ourselves gets mirrored back to us by others, which can be deeply informative when our self-perception is inaccurate. I enjoyed playing with a rhyme scheme as I wrote. When I revise this poem, I want to focus on line length to see what happens.




Poem #310, Finding Human Kind in Unlikely Places 

by Emily Gibson, Nov 6, 2022


Distinctive top-knots 

of winter-plump quail

quoted the brisk air

so the wind had no

reason to shout.

A covey of ten 

flowed over the rocky 

sands of eastern Oregon.

Like water on rocks,

uninterested in flight,

their feet weathered 

round the corner

of a metal barn,

disappeared from sight

behind a pile of roughly 

stacked silvered lumber.

Yet one male quail 

remained,

his proper bob a 

question in the air,

eyes to the direction

his bevy flowed from.

I stood at attention,

lit by silent curiosity.

Soon a hen hopped

into view, an oddity 

for a quail, her two legs 

visible but unable to run.

The male waited,

impatience in every ‘quirp,’

as the hen hobbled

unfluid, opposite of water.

When she disappeared

behind the same wood,

to meet her flock’s tail 

feathers, that sentry

quail flew up and over, 

with a last call to unify. 

Curiosity satisfied,

I sent a silent hope

for the hen, grateful

to catch glimpse 

of quail kindness,

an infusion into 

my human day.


About "Finding Human Kind in Unlikely Places ": Being in the right place at the right time, and being observant, leads to incredible poetic moments sometimes... This flock of quail passed into my field of vision just as I was returning to my car. How fortunate I was!




Poem #311, Things We Do for Love  

by Emily Gibson, Nov 7, 2022


Hidden in a nest of knit scarves,

A toasty horse climbs a hill.

Neighs ring the ridge,

Belted out from beneath

A riot of stitches,

In search of faster friends.

Those not encumbered

With a hundred

rainbow wool wraps

Worn to honor

Grandmother.


(Inspired by watercolor by 2nd grader, Luke)





















About "Things We Do for Love": An Ekphrastic Poem inspired by a watercolor done by a 2nd grader I work with.  I immediately saw this horse climbing a hill, swaddled in scarves against the cold winter sky.  So I snapped a photo of the art before he took it home so I could write this poem.




Poem #312, Third Graders with Sticks at Recess in Autumn

by Emily Gibson, Nov 8, 2022


By the wall-ball court, three kids sent fishing lines out
from curved sticks found under a fruitless fruit tree.
Later they prepared and ate their fish, cooked on straight sticks
over the flames of a stick fire that also warmed their snow-cold hands.

By the swings, two kids gathered sticks of particular size and shape,
along with snips of grass and extra-large maple leaves. When asked,
they explained, “We have a taco stand.” I see it, by the 3rd grade wing,
out of the brutal wind that drifts leaves like a sheep dog does sheep.

Under a juniper tree, a group digs, patiently, recess after recess,
with special swiss army knife sticks, to unlodge a buried rock.
Later, after that rock is covered in a foot of snow, the same sticks
become ice sculpture tools in their creation of “Penguin Island.”

Give a child a hammer, and they will nail things.
Give a child a stick, and they can do anything.



About "Third Graders with Sticks at Recess in Autumn":  This poem was inspired by students I observe every day on Recess Duty! They remind me of how I was as a child, and the way children with imaginations will make the most of sticks.  It challenges my assumptions about this screen-driven generation and gives me hope.




Poem #313, Transformed While We Slept 

by Emily Gibson, Nov 9, 2022


Yesterday afternoon, before clouds settled,

the great baker in the sky dusted powdered 

sugar over the land, like chocolate bundt cakes.

Mountain folds and ridge lines stood out, solid white 

that faded into sprinkles further down slope.


After bedtime, the sky baker’s toddlers stole

out with sifters and bags of sugar.  Joyous 

chaos ensued overnight. Crinkle cookie 

Cascades buried deep in drifts that softened all

angular lines in sight.  Now, all is smooth white.


Dawn’s light crept a dusty pink from east to west

as the toddlers hid under beds.  The baker’s 

face rose over the mountains.  Her broad full moon 

smile beamed across the day.  “Oh, you were right,

my dears, this day needed more powder.  Perfect!”



















About "Transformed While We Slept ": The story in this poem was inspired by a vision of mountains, near my horse's stable, that continued into the morning's moon rise over deep snow drifts at my house.  This poem and several other poems this week reinforced for me the power of having a daily writing habit, and how that primes one's senses and subconscious to be ever on the lookout for poetry material.



Poem #314, Raw Means We Can Still Heal

by Emily Gibson, Nov 10, 2022


I remember the time you 

cracked

like a raw chicken egg.

Your inner demons

oozed 

across our counter’s 

yellow-flecked ceramic tiles,

pooled 

in the stained grout, and then 

dripped,

like yolks

down the mint-green

kitchen cabinets.

I remember you 

cooked

yourself in the fire

of generational rage.

Afterwards, you made 

a breakfast scramble 

that fed us 

for days.


About "Raw Means We Can Still Heal":  This is the full poem before I revised it to fit Twitter character limits for this week's Move Me Poetry's poem contest.  The prompt was the word "cracked."  The vision for this poem came to me, almost complete.  People may see different things in this poem, so I don't want to say too much about it, other than it comes from childhood experiences and it includes hope.



Poem #315, The Day Formerly Known as Armistice Day 

by Emily Gibson, Nov 11, 2022


This day once stood, a marker,

a reminder of death and trenches

and foot rot and death and insanity

and dismemberment and loss

and death, always wasteful death.

A fervent hope of many nations

that a first war of the world 

could be the last

wept

behind this day.

Despite the signatures of leaders,

the wars continued

in lock step,

driven by barely concealed

economic policies.

Instead of recommitment

to end war as a method

of problem solving,

this day became rebranded

in 1954.

Now, in a twisted version

of “if you can’t beat ‘em, join ‘em,”

instead of a calendaric

statement on the ravages

wrought by war,

it bears a new name.

Thinly disguised under

flags and respect of troops,

it serves the military machine’s

jingoist propaganda

that celebrates war.


About "The Day Formerly Known as Armistice Day ": This reflection was inspired by a conversation with my partner in which he expressed sorrow at the loss of Armistice Day in the U.S. Other nations still have Armistice Day, but in my country, it was changed to Veteran's Day in 1954, during the McCarthy Era. That change remains significant, in many ways.


And that concludes Sifting the Rubble's poetry for this week! I hope you enjoyed this collection of poems. Perhaps some of them spoke to you, or maybe you found one begging to be shared with someone else. If so, I hope you will pass it on! Either way, thank you for listening and reading. Hope to see you next week with seven new poems!

Wednesday, November 9, 2022

A Poem a Day, Week 44, Oct 29 to Nov 4, 2022

 A Poem a Day, Week 44, Oct 29 to Nov 4, 2022

Welcome to Sifting the Rubble's weekly blog and podcast of my poem-a-day challenge for 2022. I am your host, and poet, Emily Gibson. The poems for the 44th week of the year, October 29 to Nov 4, started in a variety of ways. Most came from prompts from a poetry class I am attending online through Coursera, "Sharpened Visions."  So far, it is an excellent course, and free as well!

I want to explain, for those new to this podcast, that these are 1 or 2 day poems, which have not gone through the grist of revision. That comes later, something I truly look forward to doing, as I sift the collection for poems to finalize. For now, they are new, not quite steady or solid, but each speaks of something, so I share them, uncensored. It is part of my healing challenge to write a poem every day this year.

As always, you can keep track of Sifting the Rubble's posts on the Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram platforms:

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Please like and follow and share in whichever ways suit you. Thank you! :)

And now, for this week's poems!


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Poem #302, Unsolicited Advice 

by Emily Gibson, Oct 29, 2022


My mom showed me

with actions and words.

I wouldn’t listen, 

felt I knew better,

heard her ideas 

as unrealistic, critical.

Survival in our world

relegated her wisdom

as unwanted information

no matter her intention.


Here I stand

to acknowledge,

humility in hand,

her rightness.

The greatest gift?

Health.

I didn’t listen

until my body 

said No.


About "Unsolicited Advice":  I started this poem a week or so ago, to the prompt "When have you gotten unwanted information, and how did you use it?" I thought of my mom, who tried every way she could to get me off the high-pressure track I put myself on. Before she died, I think she knew it was my rail to ride, and I'd either figure it out or not. This is my poem to her, because I did figure it out, thanks to the messenger of MS!



Poem #303 Silence of Dust Speaks Volumes

by Emily Gibson, Oct 30, 2022

Found Poem: excerpt from The Grapes of Wrath by John Steinbeck 


Owners came onto the land, 

or spokesmen for owners came.

They came in closed cars.

They felt the dry earth 

with their fingers.

They drove big earth augers 

into the ground 

to test soils. 


Tenants watched uneasily 

from sun-beaten dooryards

whenever closed cars 

drove along their fields;

until, at last, owner men 

drove into the dooryards

to sit in their cars, 

to talk out of the windows. 

Beside the cars, 

tenant men stood 

for a while, then squatted

on their hams.  They found

sticks to mark their dust. 


From their open doors,

women stood and looked.

Behind, out peered the children— 

corn-headed, wide-eyed children, 

one bare foot pressed atop 

another bare foot, 

ten toes working. 

The women and children watched

their men talk 

to the owner men. 

They were silent…


About "Silence of Dust Speaks Volumes":  This poem is the first of my poems for the poetry class I am attending.  The assignment was to write a Found Poem, which creates a poem from text that already exists in the world. The text used in this poem comes from a paragraph from the Grapes of Wrath by John Steinbeck. All I did was use line breaks to transform the paragraph and enhance the meaning. 



Poem #304, Recycled

by Emily Gibson, Oct 31, 2022


Each leaf, bud to green,

unfurled a magic of carbon,

a stockpile of light.


Each leaf, green to gold,

released a shock of salvaged

star onto gray sky.


Each leaf, gold to orange,

delivered solar brilliance back 

to ease winter’s set.  


Each leaf, orange to red,

left arboreal outlines

burned on retinas.


Each leaf, red to brown,

returned ingredients to earth

for next year’s go-round.


About "Recycled":  Inspired by the sights of the day, with flames of trees against grey skies. Overnight, the trees changed, but not all at once. So on this day, I could see all the colors mentioned here.  A vision of how the trees released the light they'd captured all year came to me.  I am not sure this poem captured my vision, but it will do for now.



Poem #305, Inch Worms Pupate, Too

by Emily Gibson, Nov 1, 2022


you

too

measure

the mortal

mystery of life

in that sharp moment between breaths


About "Inch Worms Pupate, Too":  A Fibonacci Poem follows the pattern of Fibonacci, with syllables. 1/1/2/3/5/8 (the pattern of Fibonacci: each number is the sum of the previous two numbers).  I have no real understanding of where this poem came from.   The title ties to the last line, where I envisioned the sharp moment between breaths to be like the inch worm inching along, and to the mortal mystery of life that is pupation.




Poem #306, The Stapler of Appetite 

by Emily Gibson, Nov 2, 2022


Affix your gaze on portion possibilities

afforded by a plate, a bowl, a cup!


Fasten your belt to the dimension

necessary for comfort, not fashion.


Adhere to this rule alone: when 

hungry, eat, but as a sloth, slow.


Clench not your teeth, nor suck

in your gut to stave off a meal.


Nail down regular mealtimes

that every cell gets the message.


Screw down your resolve to choose

the healthier option for future’s sake.


Link today’s meals to tomorrow’s

goals: eat to live, live to eat!


About "The Stapler of Appetite":   This started with an exercise in a poetry class to make lists of concrete nouns (like Stapler) and abstract nouns (like Appetite) and make titles of poems from these lists ( The _______ of _______) to see what inspires a poem. I made about 15 potential titles from my lists.   This is a poem inspired by the exercise.



Poem #307, Portrait of a Ripe Mango

by Emily Gibson, Nov 3, 2022


Perfectly ripe, a mango fruit’s complexion

of yellows, oranges, and flecks of red,  

merge into an edible sunset.  

Devoured, slippery syrup drips and sticks 

down chin and wrist, neck and elbow. 


When perfectly ripe, a mango’s textured flesh 

cushions teeth into gentle, easy, 

smoothly satisfied bites of bliss. 

Peeled, a citrus undercurrent emits 

invisible zest at skin’s edge. 


If perfectly ripe, a mango’s aroma 

sets off a riot of taste bud 

signals that hint of ambrosia. 

Eaten, sandpaper seeds strand threads among juice 

to snag the spaces between teeth.  


Mango perfection, like an avocado, 

is a goldilocks state of mind 

led by vigilant fingertips

that palpate a rind’s imperceptible give 

to hint at ripeness underneath.  


About "Portrait of a Ripe Mango": Written for a prompt to write a deep portrait of an object, using sensory imagery. I chose a mango because just thinking about a mango brings so many textures, colors, and images to mind.  On top of sensory details, I explored syllables, giving each stanza 5 lines of 11/8/8/11/8.  



Poem #308, My Ear is an Amusement Park, a Conceit Poem

by Emily Gibson, Nov 4, 2022


Sound careens down and around,

through the tunnel-ear cochlea.

Most of the track is out of sight

though you can travel in the dark

since sound knows where to go.

Once the waves disappear from view,

no one knows what happens

like the magic of a tunnel of love.

Voila, passenger sounds do arrive

at brain’s door, translated and known. 

When the tracks are out, 

the popcorn’s burnt, 

and the animals all have hurt paws,

the show shuts down:

without an ear, can we know 

if it’s fun, or scary or worth an “again!”

Is it better to never know the experience

or to have had sound only to lose it?

Reviews are mixed at best

and subject to personal interpretation.

After all the screams are gone,

the cotton candy melted in mouths,

and heartbeats stuck on high,

a view in a funhouse mirror shows

every hair on end, shocked by sound.

Only time restores function

after episodes of high volume,

as a roller coaster eases to the end

to expel passengers out of time.


About " My Ear is an Amusement Park, a Conceit Poem": This was another assignment from a poetry class I am taking. A Conceit Poem is one which sustains a metaphor over the entire poem. A metaphor comparing two things that a person might never normally consider as similar. The goal is to convince readers that there is actually similarity. 


And that concludes Sifting the Rubble's poetry for this week! I hope you enjoyed this collection of poems. Perhaps some of them spoke to you, or maybe you found one begging to be shared with someone else. If so, I hope you will pass it on! Either way, thank you for listening and reading. Hope to see you next week with seven new poems!

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